Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Why television is now a part of everyone’s life ?In this days T.V is common an everyone .T.V let us to communicate with the world .These essay look at three causes about T.V and three effects .there are many causes about T.V .Firstly ,everyone watch T.V because they want to know about the world .For example ,my sister always see Al jazeerah channel because she want to know about the world news .Secondly ,T.V is very important since they shows some programmers we can learn from it .For example ,every week I saw a culture programmers and I learn from this programmers .Finally ,every child like to see the(use plural - cartoons with no 'the') carton and sometimes they learn from it . For example ,my small sister spend a lot of time in the T.V .In addition ,T.V is very important for everyone’s ,but there are many effects for T.V .Firstly ,when the person see T.V in his room ,he will not stay with their family a lot ,so the family will broke .For example, our parents they saw T.V in their room ,like these we are not together .Also, sometimes T.V shows a(can't use 'a' with a plural noun) bad programmers and the child see it as a result these is very bad .For example ,my small brothers see a scaring film and now he was very afraid from everything .Finally ,some person who like T.V ,he buy a lot of expensive T.V ,so he lose his money for the T.V . In conclusion T.V is very important for everyone .In this essay I told you about a(can't use 'a' with plural nouns) causes and effects of T.V .In my opinion I think you should used T.V for a (can't use 'a' with plural nouns) good ways .

1 comment:

Zurob said...

This is very long (277 words)and only has 4 errors so I'll give you 5/6 for it. Well written.