Saturday, October 11, 2008

the internet

Nowadays many people in the world use the Internet. They use the internet for many things and some of them use the internet for bad things. Also, some children use the internet and it will effect for them in many things. There are a lot of problems for using the internet and there are solution to solve these problems.
There are many problems for people using the internet. First of all, some people especially the adult people when they want to chat at computer there are some websites to chat with anyone. Sometimes they say bad things in the chat, they think these things are fun and they do like these a lot. When the children see the adult people do like this also, they imitate them. The second problem is that some people visit block websites. They enjoy when visit these websites. For example, when the people visit these websites ,these websites have bad videos and they watch it. They don’t think these things are wrong for them.
Also, there are a lot of solution to solve these problems. First of all, for the people when chat in bad things it must be an observation in the chat. But there are many observers they didn’t do anything for the people who say or do bad things in the chat. The observation must be strict with them. The second solution is that for people who visit the block websites the government must punish them and delete these websites.
To sum up, there are many people use the internet for bad things. Some of them use for chatting and visit block websites. However , there are a lot of solution to solve these problems, one of these solve is they must have observing in the chat and delete the block websites. In my opinion, should for all people in the world use the internet in good things not in bad things.

1 comment:

Zurob said...

No errors in using articles and 320 words. You get two grades for this. Both 6/6.
Your essay is well organised and argued. I don't agree with it all though. I think blocking websites doesn't solve the problem. The bad use of websites is a signal that some people have mad dieas, morals or thoughts and if we just block the websites we aren't dealing with the root of the problem.