Monday, September 22, 2008

eid

EID
Eid is the most happiness day that the people love to celebrate.First,Eid is the day that we buy a new things and ware anew clothes and shoeses .In this day the people must to go to other people house to say for them congratulation for this day and say words that gives the people good feelings.Second,in this day the small kids should go around the neighborhoods and their families to get money from all the houses .Eid is the time that comes after our sadness and it comes to let us forget the sadness and to interest our self in this day.Third,Also in this day the big man’s I mean the male parents goes outside the house to fancy (but fancy is probably the wrong word - do you mean 'buy' or 'light') the fireworks and the children’s are standing and watching the beautiful different colors.Finally,Eid is such an great day that all the peoples are doing anything to celebrate this amazing and interesting day.

1 comment:

Zurob said...

Well written. Only one error out of 7. Grade is 6/7. Enjoy the fireworkd!!