Monday, September 22, 2008

bedoor

During eid everybody make planning his holiday , First ,In AL eid I going to visit all family to celebrating .than I will go to the Parke to playing games with my friend . Next day I will go to al ain to visit my ground mother and enjoy my time with him . After that I going to (mobazara) in medial al ain it like river but is very hot so people enjoy to visiting mobazara) in eid holiday . After visiting al ain I will visit Dubai to enjoy in global village . In global village Ido many things I would like I going to playing games ,shopping, eating different kind of many country and see music .After visiting global village I going to emirates mall to skiing and make shopping .last I returning bake to home and organize me to university . I wish to have nice time .

1 comment:

Zurob said...

Hi. You used 11 gerund/infinitive structures but only got 5 right. Grade is 5/11. When you use 'to' to give the reason you are doing something you shouldn't use 'ing'